TiredPaperBoy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Animator vs Animation FAN]

Not as good as the original.

But certainly a worthy tribute, the animation was nice, but the drawing just sucked, and the ending just felt like a cheap way of ending it because you ran out of time or just got bored.

Either way, nice job.

Zanzlanz responds:

Ironically, I never saw A vs. A 3 before I made this version, so the blue screen was (I thought) my own idea. But yes, after doing the 'lava gun' thing, I got really tired, and I ran out of ideas. Thanks!

[metal core]

Not good

The animation was pritty rubbish, and the sprites you used didn't really fit in with the backgrounds you used.

All of the movement animation you used sucked, do soome more animation, not just tweening some clouds past the robot.

Spend more time on it.

pirate64 responds:

like I said in the athor comments this was a learning project. I used it to learn how to use sprites, sounds ect...

my next flash that I have just started work on is going to improve on this e.g. a story, better animation.

[Ray Zipson 1]

Painfull

It was actually quite hard to watch through all of the animation, It was crap.

I don't want to seem like an asshole, because it was obvious that you actually put effort into it. You didnt intend in spamming the portal with bollocks.

The story was a massive failure, half of the entire fucking animation was just a guy driving in a car why not just put "Later that Day" or something?

The drawing was rubbish, the only drawing tool you used was the rectangle, and circles for the 'target'... also that "Which target do I shoot?" joke, was god awfull.

The animation... well the only animation was a car driving (which the driver was just a pink hovering square but nervermind) ((more like floating as there was no visible wheel movement)) and a guy answering his brick, which was smooth, but boring.

The worst part of the flash... the voice acting... GOD! You can download sounds from the internet, not every sound effect in the ENTIRE flash has to be your own, immature sounding (No offence) voice, "DE DE DE DE DE, HELLO MOTTO" made sigh. After everytime you spoke you made a shit load of feedback/static, get a better mic.

Do these changes and you could have a passable, portal worthy flash.

Also, the blue dude... didnt he die in London 1984... but then magicly appear in London 2009.

OrangeSquash responds:

Well I'm sorry if my flash is not very good. But you do realise that this is my first ever flash of all time and that I'm 10 years old in age? Do you?

[Snow Wars Introduction]

Lulz

Nice, the humor is brilliant, the voice acting is good and the storyline is hilarious

It seemed likt it was more of a trailer than a whole flash, but I guess thats because it had to be split in 3 (yeah some people read the comments at top) only real problem I had is that it was kinda boring in between the jokes

I'd watch more

Fro responds:

Yeah, you are right it is the trailer/introduction to the submission. I will add that to the author comments now.

Thanks for the review. :)

[Leave Your Brain Behind]

SOWEET

Very nice, the animation skill was epic, and the music went really well with it. The only thing that I didnt like was that it always made me think "What is the point?"

I kinda figured out that you didnt make a flash, you made art. In my opinion you kept 'clearing' the screen too much, I think you should keep adapting the things you already have, not destroying them.

Over all, its brilliant

KidneyThief responds:

Thank you very much, very helpful review

[Newgrounds Vs. Youtube]

Damn

This is a brilliant idea (the one star) and with some talented creators it could have been brilliant, but no, you have ruined this idea with a retarded DBZ loop shit

Its like killing jesus before he's born, thats what you have done.

How'd 5 people work on this? Its like 10secs long...

PaperBat responds:

accually its 25mins long, you dident have the patience to watch it for that length

[Join The Red Bull Collab!]

Nice

Cool little animation you got there, a shame I cant animate or I'd be there pronto.

8/10 for an invitaion

3/10 for a movie

Vincoid responds:

Thanks man.

One thing though: how does (8+3)/2 make 2? Right :P

[CZ Botz]

Dont worry...

...to people who don't get it its not becuase you needed to have played counter strike. Ive play it and bots suck, no idea whats supposed to be funny about this anyway

Get a new voice actor, you sound 5 years old... while your at it you should get a new animator as well, and art desinger

Im not being sarcastic but do you actually find this funny? Also how old are you?

Akrid responds:

The voice was altered, everyone on this site is a prick. Go fuck yourself

[Cyberen Battles Cancer]

hmmmm

Its kinda bad you exploit your friends condition and fool everyone into voteing high, I didnt vote because I would feel like an arsehole if I was wrong. But still your friends got cancer so you show a flash with a duck and some looping things in the background, that doesnt really make a flash

What does his cancer have to do with this flash?

Princess-Laucherella responds:

I'm not fooling anyone; Cyberen is very ill. Please wish him well.

The link to his NG profile is in the author comments.

[My Sunday Evening]

HUH?

What the fuck was that..? seriously I have no idea what the hell happened

Emby responds:

Long story short a toxic blob of death spawned mutant things and tanks and desroyed the whole world.